I'm going for an Empire playthrough. I haven' noticed any bugs so far. Reporting some writing errors for the 1st chapter.
com and comm used interchangeably
There several instances in 1st chapter where alien races are spelled with lower case letters (ex: dredan, matrick), while it's spelled with uppercase later on.
battle tutorial about defense
they reduce the damage must faster --> they reduce the damage much faster
survival choice after tutorial battle
I crush the machine against the floor
"Crush" could be replaced with "pin", "push", or "force", "hold". "Crush" usually implies a use of force that is great enough deform or destroy.
first meeting with Michelle (Empire route)
She's good with small arms, is naturally ambidextrous and keeps her wits in battle. --> She's good with small arms, is naturally ambidextrous, and keeps her wits in battle.
scene in robot facility (starts War Crimes Quest)
Because you obey King Oscar orders... --> Because you obey King Oscar's orders...
jack1974Mar 31, 2020
Thanks. Other people sent reports but mostly typos indeed.
Winkie22Mar 31, 2020
when will the keys for steam for those who purchased on itch be released and will it be by email
jack1974Mar 31, 2020
They're already there, if you look in your account you should find them
weaseltonApr 02, 2020
Got it. Only played one. Round so far but it is looking good.
jack1974Apr 02, 2020
Cool
myoksyApr 05, 2020
Small typo, around rumi.rpy:400 "mo matter how dire the situation". I would replace mo with no : )
Something's fishy with HP and PP regen - in some encounters both values are reduced by one? So far I did not understand the rules, but I am sure that Jacob (equipment gives 1 HP regen) has sometimes 0 regen in combats. Are there environment modifiers?
jack1974Apr 05, 2020
I have fixed that typo in latest update.
The HP/PP regen gradually depletes during combat, to avoid excessive use of skills/healing in particular (I think there's a messagebox appearing in the early battles).
myoksyApr 05, 2020
hmm, I missed the box, then... I see why you added the feature, but it is rather surprising for players knowing your former games. not sure how to make it more transparent. maybe a tooltip over the regen values?
jack1974Apr 05, 2020
Yes maybe I could add that Or maybe in the attributes screen where I talk about HP/PP, can add a section about the regen system.
myoksyApr 06, 2020
~ jacob.rpy:683 "conserving our enviornment and actually"
enviornment? ; )
same file, line ~713 "this topic, He gets" - either end the sentence after topic or use a lower case "he", I think.
michelle.rpy:1080 "starting at my... my boobs"
should be staring
jack1974Apr 06, 2020
Thanks
myoksyApr 06, 2020
lakadema:101 "You're omniscent"
I don't need to be omniscient to know the correct spelling : P
lakadema:131 "sleep.I"
With all the social distancing I demand more space.
myoksyApr 06, 2020
sometimes waiting a day does not heal the party, e.g. at day 34 when Shiler announces that the team needs to fight yet another round of empire troops before getting food and water.
is this intended? I think it's confusing and believe it would be more logical if sleeping heals the chars even when the new day starts with a special event.
jack1974Apr 06, 2020
So far hasn't been a problem, but I might change it if needed. I wanted to leave some surprises since otherwise the game might have been too easy. Anyway as said I could change it if more people complain or just point it out
myoksyApr 07, 2020
not a problem per se, but it interrupts my flow: I only notice it in the pre-battle screen and have to reload to visit the hospital thingy. though this is caused by my negligence and not your game : )
To make this comment a little bit more useful, I found a few more texts in need of a blank.
tom "Exactly.That's why"
lakadema "night's sleep.I haven't been"
jack1974Apr 07, 2020
Thanks, as usual I won't reply for each typo but I check them all
myoksyApr 07, 2020
and still you answered : D
skill description of mushrooms "Speed,Evasion" Moar space!
"Anti-king" in cliff.rpy sounds weird, imho. Why not use "a lot of antiroyal sentiment"?
jack1974Apr 07, 2020
Yes I agree that sounds better, even if I wrote that because people can't stand Oscar (the king) but not the Queen. Anyway yes, anti-king seems strange to read
myoksyApr 07, 2020
michelle.rpy: "Michelle treatened to commit suicide"
-> threatened
chp3.rpy: "Thank you for you help"
-> your help
chp4.rpy: "Their hallucinogen effects are increased that way."
